We are learning to make our stories more interesting so you want to keep reading and reading...this is called 'hooking' you in. Do you think you would like to find out what happens next in these stories? If so, we are successful writers!

Scratchy Man

Once upon a time there was a strange man who scratched everything. He scratched stuff because he was angry. He lived in a dungeon with a black bat. Scratchy Man’s face was brown and purple. 

To be continued..... 

By Rory

The Dark Foggy Island

Once upon a time on a dark foggy island there was a brave girl and her clever dog.  Her dog could talk. Her dog could also change the colours of trees to blue or red or any colour it wanted to.  

But one day a dark witch appeared from under the ground,  took the dog as her prisoner and went back underground again.

To be continued... 

By Shyla

 The Spooky Classroom

Once upon a time there were two flash kids who went for a walk through a forest. It was foggy on the grass and they could barely see.

The wind whispered through their ears and said, “You’re going the wrong way”, but they thought they were going the right way.

The wind said, “Mmmmm” but they kept walking through the forest and the wind came again and said, “You’re going the wrong way”.

They came across a classroom, a very spooky one.  The door slightly opened, “Creeeeeeaaaaak”. 

To be continued... 

By Bradley

The Fluffy Bird with Fluffy Eggs

Once upon a time on a sunny morning at morning tea time, a fluffy bird sat in his nest.  He had fluffy hair and fluffy eggs and he liked to dance. 

Then a person who smelled like cupcakes disturbed him. 

To be continued

By Riley