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Showing posts with label Myia. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Myia. Show all posts
Monday, November 24, 2014
Sports Day by Myia
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Crew 4,
Myia,
Sports Day by Myia,
writing
Wednesday, October 29, 2014
Sunday, October 19, 2014
More Holiday recipes
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Connor,
Izak,
Jayme,
Josh W,
Julia,
Montana,
More Holiday recipes,
Myia,
Nikkita,
Ollie,
Ryan S
Monday, October 13, 2014
Sunday, September 28, 2014
Tuesday, September 23, 2014
Wednesday, September 3, 2014
Moving lines
Wednesday, August 20, 2014
Can we hook you into our stories....
We want to hook in our readers to our stories. This is how we started our writing. We entered a competition at the library.
“Ping bang.” I jumped
in. “Aah that’s as comfortable as a
cushion.” “Erer, it is hard to get out
of here.” I could hear the jangling
noise of kids jumping up and down.
Joining them was a good idea. That
night I felt myself bouncing up and down.
By Ryan
What was that humungous
thing? It looks like a monster. Where am I? It feels like I am in a different
place. I tiptoed downstairs. I opened the door. I had a little peek. I tiptoed outside.
By Jack
What was that thing? Was it a monster? It was coming from the door. BANG. That noise
again. “Come outside” said a voice. I crept to the door and opened it. WOOSH! Leaves blew in my face. Come on door close.
By Josh M
What was that thing? It was furry. It had a long nose. I thought it would eat me up. “Quack aaaaahhhhh!” I sprinted as fast as I
could go. I got a duck. I wondered if it would eat bread. It ate it up. It twaddled towards me.
By Jack
“What, no why would I do
that?” “I do not need to go to
bed.” “Cos you don’t need to go to bed,
I was just tricking.” Yeah I only just
got up and I’ve got a massive day ahead of me!
Josh W
Woof, Woof. What’s that sound? I heard it again. Where is it coming from? I searched and searched but I couldn’t find
it. So I went home. But I kept hearing it. “Where is it coming from?” I shouted.
By Myia
“Who was at the door?” Said Dwayne.
It was cold. Dwayne grabbed a
flashlight and went into the forest. He
heard screaming. Dwayne found eight
pages. He saw a shed. There were lots of tools.
By Montana
Boom, boom, boom. “What’s
that sound?” “Come to me,” whispered a
voice. “WWWWhat are you, who are you?”
He walked downstairs shivering like he was in the North Pole. He saw green faces staring at him.
By Jayme
“Ahhh.” “What was that?” Frightenly he walked downstairs tip toe, tip
toe. The voice said “Boom, Boom Bor.”
Jason thought for a second “What?” he kept walking.
By Jayme
In the dark night walking
through the leaves I heard the roof go ding, ding, and ding. I thought it was the bells but then I heard
bang, bang bang. It came from the door.
Whish, whish, whish the leaves went.
Bang, bang, bang the windows slammed shut.
By Bailey
Am I going to be brave or
not? I thought to myself we are nearly
there. I was still thinking about
something. Will I be brave or not?
By Julia
Snap, snap, the scissors
going snap in the bushes. What is that on the bush? We got out the magic magnifying glass. Boom. I got it. Is it a bug? Yes, but what kind of bug. It is a beautiful black mother beetle.
By Connor
The shiny sun shone on the
glittering snow. It was freezing cold on
the snowy top. From the snowy top it was
high. But from the grassy bottom it was
just cold. When I walked far away from it, it was just warm.
By Julia
Flapping wings soared in the
sky. Thumping feet shuffled in the
air. Squeaking rats raced along the
floor. Sparkling stone glittered in the
dark. The cave was swampy and slippery.
Nasty spiders tickled my feet. Pesky bugs nipped my foot and evil bugs pinched.
By Ollie
Dirt, rock and stands of
trembling people. Cars line up on the
shattered starting line with nervous messy drivers. 3,2,1, go.
By Josh W
Waves of blue shattered
everywhere. Mountains of sand were piled
high. Munted rocks stood tall. Surfers
on the humongous waves. Crabs waited to
bite. Fish danced and dived in the waves. Piers were standing tall. Sun bathing people were on the sand.
By Lewis
Tiny bits of rock surrounded
the place. Splashing noises echoed in
the distance. The foot prints were ginormous.
Ryan
Sand as far as I could see. Sparkling waves rocking back and forth like a
baby’s crib. Crabs pinching me
everywhere I go. How could this get any
better? I see tall straight trees waving
in the wind. All of a sudden smoke fills
the air. I cough and run.
By Jayme
It’s a lion, no it is a
human. Its 80 foot tall. Sand is everywhere I look. Wow! I see camels
in the distance. I think to myself who built this. Humans or was it meerkats. I don’t know.
The great sphinx is sitting proud.
By Jayme
Splish! Splash! Splosh! ZOOM!
Ahr! Curse you fish. Where’s the door?
There it is now the button. The code is 781943. Correct. Thanks, door down. VVV, ding Room 1.
By Josh M
Bong, bong there goes my
ball. Splash it’s lost. There are leaves and twigs falling. What is that, it’s big? AHHH it’s a tiger roar. I am scared, it’s a
hunter. I have got to run.
By Izak
Swirling winds are swirling
across the sky. My legs are shaking like an earthquake. Squeaking noises
sounded like my Mum screaming at me. The
swirling wind is bigger than a giraffe.
By Julia
Falling rocks, broken caves,
dead animals in my sight. Sleeping bats
on the roof. Thumping rocks fall to the
ground. Roaring waves capture me. I sink and swim to the surface. Fighting
animals run from bats. Scared rats run over my feet. Nasty spiders bite my feet.
By Ollie
The beautiful weather was
spinning in the air like a tornado.
Waterfalls in the sky, it drags in golden sand near trees shaped like
mushrooms. At the beach scaly fish in the water.
By Bailey
Ouch that hurt me, who did
that. It was just the nasty rose
bush. I think we should chop it down. I
agree. Yes, now it is going down, there
is dad. When he saw it he had a
shock. “What did you do that for, that
bush was very popular?”
By Connor
We’re getting lower and
lower. Crashing, I thought. But no we didn’t.
We hit the ground, the air breaks shoot up. The tar went crazy.
By Ryan
Wednesday, August 13, 2014
Tuesday, August 12, 2014
Today we wrote about the icy day at school.
Today when we came to school there was a lot of ice. This is what we thought about it.
The ice feels like a smashed ice cube.
It looks like green glass covered with white frozen crumbly ice on top of
it. The ice sounds like shiny glass falling on concrete.
By Julia
Slippery slidy ice burnt my hands.
Transparent ice melting into dips of tears. SMASH! It sounds like a beer
bottle dropped on the ground. It tastes
like Antarctica. It smells like fresh
frozen water sliding through a puddle.
By Josh M
The ice feels cold and frigid.
It looks like hail. Veins creeping inside the ice. It sounds like it is
raining when it cracks. Wet, green grass
melting into ice. It felt like wet paper. Crash, clutter.
By Connor
Crack, crack on icy concrete.
It feels like little dots all connected. It smells like grass. It tastes
like drops on my tongue. It sounds like
water swishing round in a puddle.
By Myia
The ice was very cold and looked like a boat shape. It sounds like crash. It smells like nothing. It tastes like freezing cars but I still ate
it.
By Montana
The white frosty ice and snow creeping down below. Bang, crash bang.
Hail smashes the ground like rockets.
By Bailey
Transparance surrounds me. I am
holding a pirate ship. Smelling like grass. “Oh what luck!” Numbing hands shoot up arms like rockets
firing into space.
By Ryan
Frosty, frozen ice tightens my icy freezing hands. That ice is pretty. SMASH! Looks like broken glass. My hands feel like they are frozen. It smells like fresh broken water. It tastes like rippled frozen bits of fur on the
frozen rippled ground.
By Jack
Transparance surrounds me. White slides through the grass. It smells like rain moving. It tastes like
fried chicken.
By Deakon
Its magical ice. It feels like
snow and glass together. It looks like water.
It sounds like water. It smells
like water. It tastes like ice.
By Nikkita
Ice numbing my hands. Ice as
white as paper. As see through as
water. Humongous rippled ice. Freezes the school nearly in half.
By Josh W
Bang! Bang! Cold frigid. Ice everywhere. Smooth pirate ship, shaped bumpy, hail. Smells like fresh water. Water paper. Brittle, crash, crash.
By Lewis
Splash, splash, what’s that on my foot? Its ice!!!!
Frozen ice, numbing my hands and feet.
It smells like crunchy dog food.
Slippery ice slipped across the ground.
Slippery shoes skidded along the teeny ice. Muddy grass covering the shiny brittle
ice. Crash in my hands. It tastes like freezing cold water. It ripples through the icy wood. People throw clean ice on the bumpy
wall. Chilly wind across the land. The ice shivered and cracked amongst the
classrooms.
By Ollie
Bree! My hands are frozen numb. Wow, it’s crystal clear. Crash, clang.
“Oh no.” It’s broken. It feels like
glass. Phew. I don’t like the wet soaked
dog smell. It comes from hills of
mountainous snow.
By Jayme
The ice tasted like tartare sauce.
It felt rough and frigid. It
smelt like eggs. It sounds like a window
smashing. It looked like a volcano. It was melting like fire burning it after my
hand was numb.
By Izak
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