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Showing posts with label Our Ice and Gymnastic writing. Show all posts
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Tuesday, May 27, 2014

Our Ice and Gymnastic Writing



Ice.
I heard wet, solid, cold, frozen frosty ice.
I heard people splashing in puddles.
I saw rain falling down from the sky.
I felt freezing, wintery, numb and cold.
I felt like I was going to die.
I wondered if it was going to snow.
I wondered if it would be nicer tomorrow.
By Ryan

Ice.
I heard the ice crack, water came out.
I heard people having fun.
I saw the frozen ice. I stepped on it.  I started to dance.
I felt cold and wet.
I felt it make me slide down the little hill.
If wondered if I would get sick.
I wondered if I would do a back flip.
By Jack

Ice.
I heard loud noises from children.
I heard cracking ice.
I saw my feet on solid ice.
I felt nervous I was going to slip.
I felt so warm.
I felt I was on fire.
I wondered why people didn’t slip.
I wondered if it will snow tomorrow.
By Julia

Gymnastics.
I heard kids puffing.
I heard kids talking.
I saw little kids running.
I felt puffed.
I felt hot.
I wondered why we were bouncing.
I wondered why there was new stuff.
By Montana

Gymnastics.
I heard noisy children.
I heard teachers telling kids what to do.
I saw colourful things.
I felt extremely hot.
I felt we were in a very noisy place.
I wondered what we would do next time.
I wondered if we would have the same teachers next time.
By Lewis

Gymnastics.
I heard laughing.
I saw kids sweating.
I felt tired and hot.
I was bouncing all the time.
I heard kids saying “I’m tired”.
I wondered  when it was going to end.
I felt sleepy inside.
I wonder how people can do all this stuff, its boiling.
Finally gymnastics was over.
By Jayme

Ice.
I heard ice shattering like shiny glass.
I heard people yelling and screaming like a tiger.
I saw people sliding fast like soft soap. 
I felt warm and numb.
I felt like sliding as well.
I wondered why aren’t they getting wet?
I wondered why is it slippery on the concrete?  
By Ollie

Gymnastics
I heard a THUD!!!
I heard kids laughing like drunk people.
I saw kind kids jumping up and down.
I felt hot like it was thirty degrees.
I felt like I was in a pit full of fire.
I wondered when will we ever leave this gym?
I wondered how long have we been here.
By Ollie

Ice.
I heard shattering ice breaking apart.
I heard screaming people getting stuck.
I saw the world was frozen all over the place.
I felt cold, my hands were blue.
I felt chilly.
I wondered if the world would be frozen, it was white all over the place.
I wondered what was coming next.
By Myia