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Can we hook you into our stories....
We want to hook in our readers to our stories. This is how we started our writing. We entered a competition at the library.
“Ping bang.” I jumped
in. “Aah that’s as comfortable as a
cushion.” “Erer, it is hard to get out
of here.” I could hear the jangling
noise of kids jumping up and down.
Joining them was a good idea. That
night I felt myself bouncing up and down.
By Ryan
What was that humungous
thing? It looks like a monster. Where am I? It feels like I am in a different
place. I tiptoed downstairs. I opened the door. I had a little peek. I tiptoed outside.
By Jack
What was that thing? Was it a monster? It was coming from the door. BANG. That noise
again. “Come outside” said a voice. I crept to the door and opened it. WOOSH! Leaves blew in my face. Come on door close.
By Josh M
What was that thing? It was furry. It had a long nose. I thought it would eat me up. “Quack aaaaahhhhh!” I sprinted as fast as I
could go. I got a duck. I wondered if it would eat bread. It ate it up. It twaddled towards me.
By Jack
“What, no why would I do
that?” “I do not need to go to
bed.” “Cos you don’t need to go to bed,
I was just tricking.” Yeah I only just
got up and I’ve got a massive day ahead of me!
Josh W
Woof, Woof. What’s that sound? I heard it again. Where is it coming from? I searched and searched but I couldn’t find
it. So I went home. But I kept hearing it. “Where is it coming from?” I shouted.
By Myia
“Who was at the door?” Said Dwayne.
It was cold. Dwayne grabbed a
flashlight and went into the forest. He
heard screaming. Dwayne found eight
pages. He saw a shed. There were lots of tools.
By Montana
Boom, boom, boom. “What’s
that sound?” “Come to me,” whispered a
voice. “WWWWhat are you, who are you?”
He walked downstairs shivering like he was in the North Pole. He saw green faces staring at him.
By Jayme
“Ahhh.” “What was that?” Frightenly he walked downstairs tip toe, tip
toe. The voice said “Boom, Boom Bor.”
Jason thought for a second “What?” he kept walking.
By Jayme
In the dark night walking
through the leaves I heard the roof go ding, ding, and ding. I thought it was the bells but then I heard
bang, bang bang. It came from the door.
Whish, whish, whish the leaves went.
Bang, bang, bang the windows slammed shut.
By Bailey
Am I going to be brave or
not? I thought to myself we are nearly
there. I was still thinking about
something. Will I be brave or not?
By Julia
Snap, snap, the scissors
going snap in the bushes. What is that on the bush? We got out the magic magnifying glass. Boom. I got it. Is it a bug? Yes, but what kind of bug. It is a beautiful black mother beetle.
By Connor
The shiny sun shone on the
glittering snow. It was freezing cold on
the snowy top. From the snowy top it was
high. But from the grassy bottom it was
just cold. When I walked far away from it, it was just warm.
By Julia
Flapping wings soared in the
sky. Thumping feet shuffled in the
air. Squeaking rats raced along the
floor. Sparkling stone glittered in the
dark. The cave was swampy and slippery.
Nasty spiders tickled my feet. Pesky bugs nipped my foot and evil bugs pinched.
By Ollie
Dirt, rock and stands of
trembling people. Cars line up on the
shattered starting line with nervous messy drivers. 3,2,1, go.
By Josh W
Waves of blue shattered
everywhere. Mountains of sand were piled
high. Munted rocks stood tall. Surfers
on the humongous waves. Crabs waited to
bite. Fish danced and dived in the waves. Piers were standing tall. Sun bathing people were on the sand.
By Lewis
Tiny bits of rock surrounded
the place. Splashing noises echoed in
the distance. The foot prints were ginormous.
Ryan
Sand as far as I could see. Sparkling waves rocking back and forth like a
baby’s crib. Crabs pinching me
everywhere I go. How could this get any
better? I see tall straight trees waving
in the wind. All of a sudden smoke fills
the air. I cough and run.
By Jayme
It’s a lion, no it is a
human. Its 80 foot tall. Sand is everywhere I look. Wow! I see camels
in the distance. I think to myself who built this. Humans or was it meerkats. I don’t know.
The great sphinx is sitting proud.
By Jayme
Splish! Splash! Splosh! ZOOM!
Ahr! Curse you fish. Where’s the door?
There it is now the button. The code is 781943. Correct. Thanks, door down. VVV, ding Room 1.
By Josh M
Bong, bong there goes my
ball. Splash it’s lost. There are leaves and twigs falling. What is that, it’s big? AHHH it’s a tiger roar. I am scared, it’s a
hunter. I have got to run.
By Izak
Swirling winds are swirling
across the sky. My legs are shaking like an earthquake. Squeaking noises
sounded like my Mum screaming at me. The
swirling wind is bigger than a giraffe.
By Julia
Falling rocks, broken caves,
dead animals in my sight. Sleeping bats
on the roof. Thumping rocks fall to the
ground. Roaring waves capture me. I sink and swim to the surface. Fighting
animals run from bats. Scared rats run over my feet. Nasty spiders bite my feet.
By Ollie
The beautiful weather was
spinning in the air like a tornado.
Waterfalls in the sky, it drags in golden sand near trees shaped like
mushrooms. At the beach scaly fish in the water.
By Bailey
Ouch that hurt me, who did
that. It was just the nasty rose
bush. I think we should chop it down. I
agree. Yes, now it is going down, there
is dad. When he saw it he had a
shock. “What did you do that for, that
bush was very popular?”
By Connor
We’re getting lower and
lower. Crashing, I thought. But no we didn’t.
We hit the ground, the air breaks shoot up. The tar went crazy.
By Ryan
Tuesday, June 17, 2014
Read our stories
Read our stories.
We have been
generating ideas, organising ideas, words and sentences. We have been writing short narratives and
have had lots of fun doing them. We are learning to hook you into our stories
with adjectives to describe what is
happening. These are the first stories we have written.
Once upon a time there lived a man bat. He lived in a dark abandoned tree. He can
speak to vampire bats. He cannot go into
the sun because he does not have his sun ring.
He felt very useless. Later he
went up to the beautiful sun because he got a sun ring from a witch on a
broomstick.
By Izak and Montana
Once upon a time there was Big Foot. He had red flaming eyes and feet as big as a
rugby field. Sad he was because everyone
scattered away and hid. He walked in the
forest. He found a cave. He walked
through it and found his family sleeping and sitting near the fire. By Bailey and Josh W
The Adventure of the Blue Dot.
Boung, boung, boung the blue dot was going to the middle of
the forest. His little shed was
colourful and full of dotty photos. This
brave dot always went on adventures!
When he went to the scary forest he found a viscous wolf. “AAAAh” he screamed and ran past the wolf and
got shot. Bang AAAAOOOO!!!!!
By Jayme and Ollie
Once upon a time there was a dot family. They lived in the old old house in the dessert.
The special thing about the dot family is there are other rainbow dots in different
colours. The problem was only a few dots
could fit in the house. They got
frustrated about it and found a huge house in the end.
By Nikkita and Myia and Julia
Once upon a time there was a super hero. He lived on a gigantic piece of cheese in
space. No one else can breathe oxygen
but he can breathe in outer space.
Powers sprayed out of him but he couldn’t get down to Earth to save
people. How could he get there? He felt
put down. Twinkle, twinkle headed
towards him. He grabbed it and his powers returned and he flew to Earth.
By Ryan and Lewis
Once upon a time there was a red dot. He lived in a colour dot house in the
forest. His house was called dot
house. The red dot was the only one in
the world. Dot had no friendly friends. Feeling lonely and with no delicious food he
ate his toe nails. Finally he found a
pink dot and got married.
By Nikkita and Julia
Once upon a time there was a skeleton zombie who was created
by a spectacular wizard. In his creepy
house filled with amazing spiders he ate rotten flesh. The wizard and the skeleton
zombie ruled the earth with the wizard’s magic wand. He could not create another skeleton zombie. They were the only ones. After they ruled the earth they ate the rotten
flesh. They went off to another place
and lived there.
Jack and Deakon
Once upon a time there was a moth man. Leaning trees and broken glass were
everywhere in the abandoned forest, covering his house. Smashing stuff, he was furry and had hard fiery
eyes. Cryptic hunters killed his
family. Turning evil and nasty and pesky
he smashed all the trees. He found his
family in a cave.
By Ollie and Jayme
Once upon a time there was a robot dragon. Dark clouds of doom surrounded his dark and
dull haunted cloud. A vortex of indestructible fire surrounded him when he saw
danger lurking up at him. WHOOSH everybody else flew away. Lonely hearted Robot
Dragon flew away with his vortex of indestructible fire surrounding him. Meanwhile another flying robot dragon surrounded them both. Robot
Dragon said “Thank you that is extraordinary.”
By Josh M
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