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Showing posts with label Riley. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Riley. Show all posts

Saturday, August 23, 2014

We are learning to make our stories more interesting so you want to keep reading and reading...this is called 'hooking' you in. Do you think you would like to find out what happens next in these stories? If so, we are successful writers!

Scratchy Man

Once upon a time there was a strange man who scratched everything. He scratched stuff because he was angry. He lived in a dungeon with a black bat. Scratchy Man’s face was brown and purple. 

To be continued..... 

By Rory

The Dark Foggy Island

Once upon a time on a dark foggy island there was a brave girl and her clever dog.  Her dog could talk. Her dog could also change the colours of trees to blue or red or any colour it wanted to.  

But one day a dark witch appeared from under the ground,  took the dog as her prisoner and went back underground again.

To be continued... 

By Shyla


 The Spooky Classroom
Once upon a time there were two flash kids who went for a walk through a forest. It was foggy on the grass and they could barely see.

The wind whispered through their ears and said, “You’re going the wrong way”, but they thought they were going the right way.

The wind said, “Mmmmm” but they kept walking through the forest and the wind came again and said, “You’re going the wrong way”.

They came across a classroom, a very spooky one.  The door slightly opened, “Creeeeeeaaaaak”. 

To be continued... 

By Bradley



The Fluffy Bird with Fluffy Eggs
Once upon a time on a sunny morning at morning tea time, a fluffy bird sat in his nest.  He had fluffy hair and fluffy eggs and he liked to dance. 

Then a person who smelled like cupcakes disturbed him. 
To be continued
By Riley



 

 

 

Monday, August 4, 2014

Crew 3's Poems



Our Poetry

We are learning to write different types of poems. This poem is called a Cinquain poem and it has one word on the first line, two words on the second line, three words on the third line, four words on the fourth line and one word on the fifth and last line.



We went outside and looked around our school.  We thought about what we saw and wrote words to match.  We are really proud of our amazing poems.



Mud

Stompy slimy

Brown slippery shiny

Make a mud pie

Ugh

(By the Whole class)




Sitting

Wood Concrete

Seagulls singing flying

Trees green thick blowing

Hot

By Bradley, Ashton, Ryan




Sitting

Having fun

Listening talking watching

Talking to each other

Typing

By Emma, Riley and Izac




Sitting

Plants swinging

Feet flat still

Legs up sitting down

Thinking
By Shyla, Ethan and Holly




Sitting

Chair wood

Concrete ground trees

Wet green picnic tables

Rainy

By Rory and Saskia




Sitting

Concrete tiles

Shade birds flying

Everywhere fast whizz white

Thinking

By Jamie and Luke




Grass

Dirt underneath

Flossy flowers growing

Bees buzzing happily together

Lovely

By Jorja, Charli and Kea




Sitting

Resting sleeping

Chair wood moss

Together blue watching waiting

Peacefully

By Kea, Charli and Jorja




Nature

Trees blowing

Wet picnic tables

Grass slides everywhere slowly

Sky

By Shyla, Ethan and Holly




Houses

Slides Ladders

Flowers mowing trees

Mud steps slides sunglasses

Sunny

By Luke and Jamie




Trees

Humungous tiny

Lots of leaves

Big wood spiky branches

Weaving

By Emma, Izac and Riley