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Showing posts with label Rory. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Rory. Show all posts

Saturday, August 23, 2014

We are learning to make our stories more interesting so you want to keep reading and reading...this is called 'hooking' you in. Do you think you would like to find out what happens next in these stories? If so, we are successful writers!

Scratchy Man

Once upon a time there was a strange man who scratched everything. He scratched stuff because he was angry. He lived in a dungeon with a black bat. Scratchy Man’s face was brown and purple. 

To be continued..... 

By Rory

The Dark Foggy Island

Once upon a time on a dark foggy island there was a brave girl and her clever dog.  Her dog could talk. Her dog could also change the colours of trees to blue or red or any colour it wanted to.  

But one day a dark witch appeared from under the ground,  took the dog as her prisoner and went back underground again.

To be continued... 

By Shyla


 The Spooky Classroom
Once upon a time there were two flash kids who went for a walk through a forest. It was foggy on the grass and they could barely see.

The wind whispered through their ears and said, “You’re going the wrong way”, but they thought they were going the right way.

The wind said, “Mmmmm” but they kept walking through the forest and the wind came again and said, “You’re going the wrong way”.

They came across a classroom, a very spooky one.  The door slightly opened, “Creeeeeeaaaaak”. 

To be continued... 

By Bradley



The Fluffy Bird with Fluffy Eggs
Once upon a time on a sunny morning at morning tea time, a fluffy bird sat in his nest.  He had fluffy hair and fluffy eggs and he liked to dance. 

Then a person who smelled like cupcakes disturbed him. 
To be continued
By Riley



 

 

 

Monday, August 4, 2014

Crew 3's Poems



Our Poetry

We are learning to write different types of poems. This poem is called a Cinquain poem and it has one word on the first line, two words on the second line, three words on the third line, four words on the fourth line and one word on the fifth and last line.



We went outside and looked around our school.  We thought about what we saw and wrote words to match.  We are really proud of our amazing poems.



Mud

Stompy slimy

Brown slippery shiny

Make a mud pie

Ugh

(By the Whole class)




Sitting

Wood Concrete

Seagulls singing flying

Trees green thick blowing

Hot

By Bradley, Ashton, Ryan




Sitting

Having fun

Listening talking watching

Talking to each other

Typing

By Emma, Riley and Izac




Sitting

Plants swinging

Feet flat still

Legs up sitting down

Thinking
By Shyla, Ethan and Holly




Sitting

Chair wood

Concrete ground trees

Wet green picnic tables

Rainy

By Rory and Saskia




Sitting

Concrete tiles

Shade birds flying

Everywhere fast whizz white

Thinking

By Jamie and Luke




Grass

Dirt underneath

Flossy flowers growing

Bees buzzing happily together

Lovely

By Jorja, Charli and Kea




Sitting

Resting sleeping

Chair wood moss

Together blue watching waiting

Peacefully

By Kea, Charli and Jorja




Nature

Trees blowing

Wet picnic tables

Grass slides everywhere slowly

Sky

By Shyla, Ethan and Holly




Houses

Slides Ladders

Flowers mowing trees

Mud steps slides sunglasses

Sunny

By Luke and Jamie




Trees

Humungous tiny

Lots of leaves

Big wood spiky branches

Weaving

By Emma, Izac and Riley

Friday, June 6, 2014

Room 3 Stories - "The Adventures of Teddy and Stitch"

We are learning to write stories with characters, a setting, a problem, a solution and a feeling.
Once upon a time there was a princess who lived in a castle with Stitch and Teddy.  It was  a rainy night.  The witch stole the princess and boiled the potion up and the princess drank it. The next minute, the princess was a frog, but Teddy grabbed the wand that was filled with poison and passed the wand to Stitch.  Stitch cast a spell on the witch and she turned in to a frog and they put her in a pot. Then they found the big book of spells and cast the princess back to herself. The princess said, "Thank you."  Teddy thought the princess was nice.  The princess was happy. The End.  By Jaime
Once upon a time in the morning, at home, when it had just stopped snowing, Teddy and Stitch went out of the house to play in the snow.  Then! Captain Hook came along and scared Teddy. Stitch got worried about Teddy, he didn't want his brother to die. So he kicked and punched Hook until, "Dun, dun, dun, dun!", Hook fell down a deep ditch and was never to be seen again.  Stitch thought Teddy was very proud of him and Stitch was proud of himself too.  Then they lived happily ever after.  The End.   By Charli
Once upon a time Stitch and Teddy went walking on the moon and they came across a zombie.  They threw a boomerang at the zombie and then they went to their rocket and flew home to Planet Stitch and Teddy. They felt happy because they defeated the zombie.  The End.    By Luke
Once upon a time on a snowy day Stitch and Teddy found a witch's house.  The mean witch was out shopping for some food to cook for tea.  Teddy and Stitch went inside.  But the witch came home.  Stitch hid behind the couch but Teddy couldn't find anywhere to hide. Then the witch caught Teddy in a net, magic-upped some handcuffs and put him in a cage.  So Stitch kicked the witch and she fell in to the fire and died.  The End.   By Ashton
Once upon a time there were two teddies who lived in a mansion.  Their names were Teddy and Stitch.  They loved their mansion.  Then it was night time and they went to bed.  Then is was morning and they had toast.  Just when they were finished their toast, a robber came in and stole their money and gold. Then Teddy caught him and cooked him for tea. 
The End.    By William
Once upon a time on a snowy night at my house I woke up and Teddy the Cat and Stitch the Bird were on my bed.  They were dancing but they fell off my bed.  I picked them up and put them in a safe place.  Then it was morning and I took them to school.  I felt amazing.  The End.   By Holly
Once upon a time Stitch and Teddy were on a cliff on a windy morning.  They were dancing and then an old lady pushed Stitch off, but Teddy saved him. Teddy and Stitch are awesome.  The End.   By Riley L
Once upon a time on a cold night Stitch and Teddy found a dark castle. A dragon lived in the dark castle.  Stitch and Teddy had a pet pig and a pet sheep.  They opened the door and went in to the castle.  The dragon hid behind the steps.  Then Stitch and Teddy went up the steps and the dragon followed them.  Stitch and Teddy heard a noise and zipped up the rest of the steps.  The dragon zipped up the steps too.  Teddy told Stitch to go in to the bedroom with the pets.   Teddy saved everyone and the dragon died.  Teddy and Stitch were happy.  The End.   By Shyla
Once upon a time Stitch and Teddy Bear were in the mountains.  It was hailing.  They were cold.  Stitch said, "Don't look behind!"  But Bear did look behind.   "Ahhhhhhhh", Bear screamed.  Stitch and Bear ran.  Stitch said, "I'll get him" and he scratched the zombie and the zombie died.  Stitch said, "Maybe I am super".  They felt happy.  The End.    By Rory
Once upon a time on a sunny Spring morning Teddy wanted some honey.  He got up and saw a bee hive and decided to get it.  But he got stuck in it.  What a clumsy bear.  Then Stitch came along and helped him out.  But the bees came out as well.  Run, run, run.  Teddy felt sticky.  Stitch thought he should not stop running. Eventually they lost the bees.  The End.   By Izobella
Once upon a time there were two little creatures called Stitch and Teddy.  They were in the forest at night and it was raining.  They were trying to find shelter.   Then a monster came and kicked them away.  Apple Man killed the monster.  That night Apple Man built Stitch and Teddy a shelter.  The End.   By Ethan