Praciticing Personification - Heavy Metal!

Her claws snipped, snipped my fingers off. 

She looks like she has got a arm beside her face. 

She can blink about 1 000 000 times a minute. 

She has her name on her t-shirt. 

And she lives on a rocky volcano.

Emma

Her fist destroyed the building. 

Her arm goes round, round, and round. 

Her wrecking ball is pounding the dirt. 

She loves trashing the place. 

Her wrecking ball swings and swings through the sky. 

She is crying. 

Her arm is as tall as a skyscraper. 

She is lonely.

She zig zags through the dirt. 

She is the ultimate crusher. 

She rolls through fences.

Buildings crack, cars get smashed, and roads crumble. 

She makes earthquakes. 

The light makes her work. 

Her face doesn't smile. 

She frowns.

Noah

 Her sturdy body looks best for her.  Her body is orange,bluey silvery, and white.  Her jagged teeth bite the ground.  Her feet are round and huge.  Her arm is long and slim and on her neck says her name like a tatoo.

Kate

The Machine
Her huge long arm started to reach as long as it could go.  Her blue body started to smash the building as hard as she could. She loved smashing the enormous, old building that took too long to crush. Once she finished smashing the building, she wanted to smash it again.

Ashleigh

 
It started smashing concrete.  Bang, smash, oww.  Right at that moment it hit a human.  He was knocked unconscious.  Guess he shouldn't have been playing in that area.  It's jagged teeth looked like it was eating itself.  It's engine was like a dying predator.  It's feet are steady and chained.

Mason