The drains…..
One day some people came to check the drains at break.
It was crowded with kids like a soccer field and as loud as someone
screaming. I said “Can we go and
play,” to Flynn. But Flynn said “No, after it’s done.” So we stayed there. Then it finally finished and the bell rang so
we had to go to class.
Josh
Once I was biking through the forest. Suddenly I heard a noise in the drains. I stopped.
I thought of going down there. I
didn’t want too. It was gooey and
sloppy. But I went down there
anyway. I found what was making the
noise. It was like chicken bones and as
scary as a shark. I said “Argheee it’s a
dead body.” It was gross and disgusting
and annoying. I wanted it out. A little voice said that he cannot come up.
The drain was as dark as night time. The
voice said “He’s been down here for many years.” I got out because the voice kept whispering
in my ear. A few days later I went
fishing. It was as fun as riding a
dolphin. I said “Wow Dad you caught a
dog fish.” It was as loose as a broken
robot. The fish was slimy.
Noah
Once upon a time there was a rat. He lived in the drains. It was like rotten mould and old mud. He said “It smells like something you would
not eat.” So one day he said “I’m going
to get out of this.” So he packed his
bag. On he went until he came to a very
yucky part. He said “It has got a lot of
terrible stuff like old fish.” It was
hideous. So he walked through the sloppy mess.
When he came out of it he met his brother. His brother said “How have you been?” The rat
said “Terrible, disgusting and torture.”
“I know,” said his brother. “I
agree Rat.” “Lets get out of here,” said
his brother. “Yeah” said Rat.
William
The drain was as black as ink. I thought
”Yuck it smells like rotten flesh.” And
it had so many leaves. It was
dirty and sloppy. The pipe was long and slimy and crowded.
Ollie
On a wet Saturday morning I was walking to the beach
with my dog. A drain appeared in front
of me but I never knew it was so close to us. A huge puddle was in front and that’s why I
couldn’t see the drain. Then my dog saw
another dog, he ran straight to him. I tripped up and went head first into the
noxious, sloppy, decaying, gross and hideous drain. It smelled like rotten flesh with lots of sandflies. I was stuck in there for four hours until Mum
and Dad searching for me. They tried to
pull me out but failed. They kept
trying. It took five goes before
they actually got me out of the drain.
Brodie
Three weeks back drain people came to our school to
fix them. In the drains it looked like
rotten flesh and disgusting. Ashleigh
said “Yuck, that looks like rotten slimy chicken.” It just looked really gross. The noise was annoying. It smelt like slimy rotten, gooey
chocolate. Some rats and mice live in
drains and if they do they will be all dirty all the time and they will get
stinky. I have held a mouse and rat
before because my Mum wanted a photo. When I was holding the rat it bit my
finger because I was holding the rat by its tail. I said “Ow” because it really hurt. The rat was biggish and the mouse was
smallish. Ashleigh said “There might be
some mice and rats in the drains Izobella.”
The drains are as smelly as the smelliest rat in the world.
Ashleigh
Once there was a baby bandicoot crawling inside a
drain. He was scared so he said “Eek,
eek, eek!” He crawled back to his bush.
He thought the drain was gross, hideous, disgusting, sloppy and
gooey. The next day he went to the icky
drain. It was as sloppy as a snail and
as loud as construction work. So he went
down. Later on that day in the drain he
found some corn he wanted to eat. But it
was made out of a mans invention so the bandicoot said “Yuck, yuck,” and he
spitted the piece of metal out. The
metal was orange and green. He dug so
deep that he touched the core of the earth. He saw another pipe so he crawled
at 7k an hour to get there.
Flynn
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