Read our stories

Read our stories.

We have been generating ideas, organising ideas, words and sentences.  We have been writing short narratives and have had lots of fun doing them. We are learning to hook you into our stories with adjectives to describe what is  happening. These are the first stories we have written.

Once upon a time there lived a man bat.  He lived in a dark abandoned tree. He can speak to vampire bats.  He cannot go into the sun because he does not have his sun ring.  He felt very useless.  Later he went up to the beautiful sun because he got a sun ring from a witch on a broomstick.

By Izak and Montana

Once upon a time there was Big Foot.  He had red flaming eyes and feet as big as a rugby field.  Sad he was because everyone scattered away and hid.  He walked in the forest.  He found a cave. He walked through it and found his family sleeping and sitting near the fire.                     By Bailey and Josh W                            

The Adventure of the Blue Dot.

Boung, boung, boung the blue dot was going to the middle of the forest.  His little shed was colourful and full of dotty photos.  This brave dot always went on adventures!  When he went to the scary forest he found a viscous wolf.  “AAAAh” he screamed and ran past the wolf and got shot.   Bang  AAAAOOOO!!!!!

By Jayme and Ollie

Once upon a time there was a dot family.   They lived in the old old house in the dessert. The special thing about the dot family is there are other rainbow dots in different colours.  The problem was only a few dots could fit in the house.  They got frustrated about it and found a huge house in the end.

By Nikkita and Myia and Julia

Once upon a time there was a super hero.  He lived on a gigantic piece of cheese in space.  No one else can breathe oxygen but he can breathe in outer space.  Powers sprayed out of him but he couldn’t get down to Earth to save people.  How could he get there? He felt put down.  Twinkle, twinkle headed towards him. He grabbed it and his powers returned and he flew to Earth.

By Ryan and Lewis

Once upon a time there was a red dot.  He lived in a colour dot house in the forest.  His house was called dot house.  The red dot was the only one in the world.  Dot had no friendly friends.  Feeling lonely and with no delicious food he ate his toe nails.  Finally he found a pink dot and got married.

By Nikkita and Julia

Once upon a time there was a skeleton zombie who was created by a spectacular wizard.  In his creepy house filled with amazing spiders he ate rotten flesh. The wizard and the skeleton zombie ruled the earth with the wizard’s magic wand.  He could not create another skeleton zombie.  They were the only ones.  After they ruled the earth they ate the rotten flesh.  They went off to another place and lived there.

Jack and Deakon

Once upon a time there was a moth man.  Leaning trees and broken glass were everywhere in the abandoned forest, covering his house.  Smashing stuff, he was furry and had hard fiery eyes.  Cryptic hunters killed his family.  Turning evil and nasty and pesky he smashed all the trees.  He found his family in a cave.

By Ollie and Jayme

Once upon a time there was a robot dragon.  Dark clouds of doom surrounded his dark and dull haunted cloud. A vortex of indestructible fire surrounded him when he saw danger lurking up at him. WHOOSH everybody else flew away. Lonely hearted Robot Dragon flew away with his vortex of indestructible fire surrounding him.  Meanwhile another flying  robot dragon surrounded them both. Robot Dragon said “Thank you that is extraordinary.”

By Josh M