I Love to Write Blog Competition

And the winners are:
Competition One: Mackenzie Jones
Competition Two: Flynn Woods
Competition Three: Dairne Woods

Congratulations!
We will be in touch.

Ryan's Kreo Bumblebee

I built a Kreo Bumblebee. I took some photos.

By Ryan

More Heavy Metal - Personification Writing

Her jagged teeth are reaching to pick up rocks.  Her cumbersome toes are working like a rocket, zooming around the hockey field. Her body is dancing around the place,  digging and scratching, banging everywhere! You can hear her at the door whining to get in.
 
Casey

His sturdy body crushed, munched, and destroyed piles of rocks and turned them into dust. The dirt came out from the long dirty arm. The feet were two feet long and baby blue. The feet are so prickly they look like a hedgehog. His body looks like a rectangle with robot writing.
 
Luke


His arm pounded the rock with his big strong rusty hand. His massive feet moved through the strong mud. His sturdy arm smashes the boulders, bricks, and stone. His stomach is hot. His sharp fingers dig up stone and dirt. The trees get destroyed from his steel fist. His eyesight is as good as an eagle.
 
Ollie
 

His sharp claw smashed in the earth.  
His metal arm scraped the concrete.  
His jagged teeth picked up rocks.  
His massive arm pulled the tree away from the ground
 
Aaron


His sharp teeth crushed the ground. 
He lifted the rocks with his claws, like hands. 
He had scratches on his teeth. 
He is a mean destroyer. 
His powerful arms were dirty.
By Rory

His arms were smashing the heavy boulders. His legs were crashing  and stomping over stones. His chest is chomping and pounding the earth. His feet were snapping the humongous  stones. The head of the  gigantic thing was wrecking houses and damaging buildings.  His knees were pounding the grass in seconds. His elbows were destroying playgrounds.
Brodie

Her arms keep pounding the concrete. 
Her feet kept rusting as she rumbled past the broken buildings. 
Her rusty hand dug into the bottom of the earth.  
Her teeth kept crunching.  
She kept on eating until it was all rubble.
By Jayme




Her jagged teeth ate the floor. 
I hear her neck at the door. 
Her eye is small but  tough.  
Her arm is big and rough.  
She  picks up wire and a tyre and then she finished.  
She threw it all away and said,  
"I will see you another day".
Izobella

Her sharp  shiny teeth are grabbing metal.  She is crushing the wheel and smashing rocks. The rusty wheel rolled away down the hill, striking stones.  They started sinking at the bottom of the hill and then started getting bigger and bigger.
 
Julia

Praciticing Personification - Heavy Metal!

Her claws snipped, snipped my fingers off. 

She looks like she has got a arm beside her face. 

She can blink about 1 000 000 times a minute. 

She has her name on her t-shirt. 

And she lives on a rocky volcano.

Emma

Her fist destroyed the building. 

Her arm goes round, round, and round. 

Her wrecking ball is pounding the dirt. 

She loves trashing the place. 

Her wrecking ball swings and swings through the sky. 

She is crying. 

Her arm is as tall as a skyscraper. 

She is lonely.

She zig zags through the dirt. 

She is the ultimate crusher. 

She rolls through fences.

Buildings crack, cars get smashed, and roads crumble. 

She makes earthquakes. 

The light makes her work. 

Her face doesn't smile. 

She frowns.

Noah

 Her sturdy body looks best for her.  Her body is orange,bluey silvery, and white.  Her jagged teeth bite the ground.  Her feet are round and huge.  Her arm is long and slim and on her neck says her name like a tatoo.

Kate

The Machine
Her huge long arm started to reach as long as it could go.  Her blue body started to smash the building as hard as she could. She loved smashing the enormous, old building that took too long to crush. Once she finished smashing the building, she wanted to smash it again.

Ashleigh

 
It started smashing concrete.  Bang, smash, oww.  Right at that moment it hit a human.  He was knocked unconscious.  Guess he shouldn't have been playing in that area.  It's jagged teeth looked like it was eating itself.  It's engine was like a dying predator.  It's feet are steady and chained.

Mason
 

Maths Lately

We have been learning about patterning.  This helps us later to see how numbers are predictable through the patterns they make.

 

 

My little book

Thank you for my lovely book.  I really enjoyed and enjoy looking at it and reading what you have written. It cheers me up and makes me smile.

Blogging Competition.

We like writing Blogging Competition. 

Be in to win.

If you want to win one of these books you need to do the following:

Be a student in Base 3 4 at Freeville School

Competition one

Put in a simile about yourself.  For example Lizzie is like a babbling stream winding its way to the ocean.

Competition two

Put in your best personification sentence.  This can be about anyone or anything.

Competition three

For grown up people that belong to children in Base 3 4. 

Put in a comment and it will go into the lucky draw.

Rules.

You can not put in more than 5 sentences for each competition.

You must enter them in the comments section of the blog.

If you don't know how to do any of this you can ask your teachers.

We will announce the winners when we return to school after the holidays.

Good luck, we are looking forward to your entries.

Gaudi Houses

Happy Birthday to Antoni Gaudi - 161 years old last week. He came from Spain. In maths, we are focusing on Algebra. We made repeating patterns and then shaped them into the types of buildings that Gaudi designed and made.

Science Friday: Rocket Canisters

The new knee

Out of hospital and thinking of you all and missing being at school. Very very slow and reminding myself that it will get better.  Did this on piccollage and have been playing with the ipad.  Lots of good ideas for when I get back.  I hope that you are all looking after Tania and Mrs Q. Tania has been telling me about all the exciting things you are doing at school, I really liked the emotion picture in the hall drawings.   Not long until the holidays.