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Wednesday, June 18, 2014

Mrs Umbrella, our writing.



We wrote this story as a class. We changed it to make it more interesting.

Once upon a time there was an orange umbrella.
Once upon a time there was an orange umbrella.
It lived in a mini hutch.
The mini hutch it lived in had wonderful art dancing on the shelves.
It talked and flew.
Mrs Umbrella gabbled as she flew through the windy air.
It needed glasses.
Suddenly Mrs Umbrella collided with a colourful rainbow.
She felt angry.
She felt furious.
She went to spec savers and bought glasses.
Spec savers were having a sale so she went and bought 100 pairs for $4.00.

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