Hook into our writing.

We have been learning how to hook our readers into our stories.  We want them to read on.... We wrote these ones as a class before we wrote our own. 

Broken tracks littered the ground.  Caves of gold glittered in the distance.  Munted carts stood leaning like a turning wave.  The mine was deserted. Squeaking bats hung from.....

 

Fighting winds screaming. Whirling noises spinning like a helicopter.  Stinging eyes closing tightly.  Wobbling 
everything....