Our Ice and Gymnastic Writing

Ice.

I heard wet, solid, cold, frozen frosty ice.

I heard people splashing in puddles.

I saw rain falling down from the sky.

I felt freezing, wintery, numb and cold.

I felt like I was going to die.

I wondered if it was going to snow.

I wondered if it would be nicer tomorrow.

By Ryan

Ice.

I heard the ice crack, water came out.

I heard people having fun.

I saw the frozen ice. I stepped on it.  I started to dance.

I felt cold and wet.

I felt it make me slide down the little hill.

If wondered if I would get sick.

I wondered if I would do a back flip.

By Jack

Ice.

I heard loud noises from children.

I heard cracking ice.

I saw my feet on solid ice.

I felt nervous I was going to slip.

I felt so warm.

I felt I was on fire.

I wondered why people didn’t slip.

I wondered if it will snow tomorrow.

By Julia

Gymnastics.

I heard kids puffing.

I heard kids talking.

I saw little kids running.

I felt puffed.

I felt hot.

I wondered why we were bouncing.

I wondered why there was new stuff.

By Montana

Gymnastics.

I heard noisy children.

I heard teachers telling kids what to do.

I saw colourful things.

I felt extremely hot.

I felt we were in a very noisy place.

I wondered what we would do next time.

I wondered if we would have the same teachers next time.

By Lewis

Gymnastics.

I heard laughing.

I saw kids sweating.

I felt tired and hot.

I was bouncing all the time.

I heard kids saying “I’m tired”.

I wondered  when it was going to end.

I felt sleepy inside.

I wonder how people can do all this stuff, its boiling.

Finally gymnastics was over.

By Jayme

Ice.

I heard ice shattering like shiny glass.

I heard people yelling and screaming like a tiger.

I saw people sliding fast like soft soap. 

I felt warm and numb.

I felt like sliding as well.

I wondered why aren’t they getting wet?

I wondered why is it slippery on the concrete?  

By Ollie

Gymnastics

I heard a THUD!!!

I heard kids laughing like drunk people.

I saw kind kids jumping up and down.

I felt hot like it was thirty degrees.

I felt like I was in a pit full of fire.

I wondered when will we ever leave this gym?

I wondered how long have we been here.

By Ollie

Ice.

I heard shattering ice breaking apart.

I heard screaming people getting stuck.

I saw the world was frozen all over the place.

I felt cold, my hands were blue.

I felt chilly.

I wondered if the world would be frozen, it was white all over the place.

I wondered what was coming next.

By Myia