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Thursday, July 11, 2013

More Heavy Metal - Personification Writing

Her jagged teeth are reaching to pick up rocks.  Her cumbersome toes are working like a rocket, zooming around the hockey field. Her body is dancing around the place,  digging and scratching, banging everywhere! You can hear her at the door whining to get in.
 

Casey


His sturdy body crushed, munched, and destroyed piles of rocks and turned them into dust. The dirt came out from the long dirty arm. The feet were two feet long and baby blue. The feet are so prickly they look like a hedgehog. His body looks like a rectangle with robot writing.
 

Luke


His arm pounded the rock with his big strong rusty hand. His massive feet moved through the strong mud. His sturdy arm smashes the boulders, bricks, and stone. His stomach is hot. His sharp fingers dig up stone and dirt. The trees get destroyed from his steel fist. His eyesight is as good as an eagle.
 

Ollie
 

His sharp claw smashed in the earth.  
His metal arm scraped the concrete.  
His jagged teeth picked up rocks.  
His massive arm pulled the tree away from the ground
 

Aaron


His sharp teeth crushed the ground. 
He lifted the rocks with his claws, like hands. 
He had scratches on his teeth. 
He is a mean destroyer. 
His powerful arms were dirty.
By Rory




His arms were smashing the heavy boulders. His legs were crashing  and stomping over stones. His chest is chomping and pounding the earth. His feet were snapping the humongous  stones. The head of the  gigantic thing was wrecking houses and damaging buildings.  His knees were pounding the grass in seconds. His elbows were destroying playgrounds.
Brodie





Her arms keep pounding the concrete. 
Her feet kept rusting as she rumbled past the broken buildings. 
Her rusty hand dug into the bottom of the earth.  
Her teeth kept crunching.  
She kept on eating until it was all rubble.
By Jayme





Her jagged teeth ate the floor. 
I hear her neck at the door. 
Her eye is small but  tough.  
Her arm is big and rough.  
She  picks up wire and a tyre and then she finished.  
She threw it all away and said,  
"I will see you another day".
Izobella



Her sharp  shiny teeth are grabbing metal.  She is crushing the wheel and smashing rocks. The rusty wheel rolled away down the hill, striking stones.  They started sinking at the bottom of the hill and then started getting bigger and bigger.
 

Julia

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